When was the last time some one broke your heart?
Broken Hearts always hurt, and even if people tell you that time will heal everything, a broken heart never heals.
I share with you my feelings when i was heart broken for the first time.
I knew, her beauty
was the knife ...
Which was high in flight,
without an aim -
Piercing my heart
It thought, was a nice game.
It did hit
And on target
Went through the heart,
Breaking the blood gasket.
I did see
In her eyes,
In her thoughts,
The truth lies.
Of pure love
Glittering with its might,
As of diamonds
Gleaming in the light.
I dreamed of her night and day,
Without fail, everyday
I thought and thought
And concluded then -
The key to her heart
Was in friendship's den.
I sensed pure love
For her deep in my heart,
I believed I should be
Of her life, a part.
Days whizzed past, with sleepless nights
I began to have a few fore sights,
She was the one I was looking for-
The one whom I was striving for.
Then with the genuine and innocent help of a quacker,
Who got us both to know each other,
I built up friendship's sheltering tree
Under which was nourished, Oh! darlin, my Love for thee!
Slowly but steadily,
As I stepped in her heart,
I found her love lying there
But it seemed, a class apart
For all it was, a kind of brotherly love
My heart was in pieces, lying apart.
But, she still rules my mind,
Never get off, at least for years
That was what , for me destined
For the past , several years.
Broken Hearts always hurt, and even if people tell you that time will heal everything, a broken heart never heals.
Broken Heart ...
I share with you my feelings when i was heart broken for the first time.
An urge I had -
was the first in life,I knew, her beauty
was the knife ...
Which was high in flight,
without an aim -
Piercing my heart
It thought, was a nice game.
It did hit
And on target
Went through the heart,
Breaking the blood gasket.
I did see
In her eyes,
In her thoughts,
The truth lies.
Of pure love
Glittering with its might,
As of diamonds
Gleaming in the light.
I dreamed of her night and day,
Without fail, everyday
I thought and thought
And concluded then -
The key to her heart
Was in friendship's den.
I sensed pure love
For her deep in my heart,
I believed I should be
Of her life, a part.
Days whizzed past, with sleepless nights
I began to have a few fore sights,
She was the one I was looking for-
The one whom I was striving for.
Then with the genuine and innocent help of a quacker,
Who got us both to know each other,
I built up friendship's sheltering tree
Under which was nourished, Oh! darlin, my Love for thee!
Slowly but steadily,
As I stepped in her heart,
I found her love lying there
But it seemed, a class apart
For all it was, a kind of brotherly love
My heart was in pieces, lying apart.
But, she still rules my mind,
Never get off, at least for years
That was what , for me destined
For the past , several years.
~great poem...who wrote it though? The ryhms of the poem are interesting... a very powerful poem!beautiful writing, i like the mood the poem gives to the person reading it~
ReplyDeleteman that is true i really like it
ReplyDeleteomg!!!!i loved it!!!
ReplyDeletei love it u have it just perfect.am undergoing it and i can tell u are
ReplyDeletethat is so true, i had went through heart brake twice and is still tryin to get through it...this poem is exactly how i felt the first time and also how im feelin now. this is really a awsome poem and i love it.
ReplyDeletei love the poem...but in the picture it says "does a broken heart every really mend"isnt it supposed to be ever? but great poem i loved it
ReplyDeleteI FUCKING LIKE THIS POEM :')
ReplyDeletewhat a bloody hell nice blog dude .. ^^ !!
ReplyDeletemind to teach me some ? ..
^^ ! really appreacite you ^^ !
hey Nazz thanks a lot! will love to give you advice.. thats what im good at :P
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